After Jade and myself made the amendments from our first pitch we then re-pitched our film to the class. We received a second load feedback sheets from our class and Miss McGrath.
After receiving the constructive criticism from the class, Jade and myself found that we needed to:
• Add our reasons to why we are inspired by the films we have chosen
• Add a age certificate and add reasons
• Decide on a title for our film
• Add more detail to our narrative
After taking this on board me and Hade made some final adjustments to the pitch adding all of the above and here is our final pitch: