This is the video of Jade and myself presenting our first draft of our pitch to the class. The main constructive criticisms we received from the class were:
- We need to make our Narative more clear by applying Todorov's Theory.
- Our target audience was capped too low as people over the ages of 25 May be interested in our film.
- To clarify if our film is exclusively British or has some American influences .
- Is the budget of our film too low?
- Research into a production studio for our film.