Thursday, 29 January 2015

Pitch Video

This is the video of Jade and myself presenting our first draft of our pitch to the class. The main constructive criticisms we received from the class were: 
  • We need to make our Narative more clear by applying Todorov's Theory.
  • Our target audience was capped too low as people over the ages of 25 May be interested in our film.
  • To clarify if our film is exclusively British or has some American influences .
  • Is the budget of our film too low? 
  • Research into a production studio for our film.

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